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Two words bore holes through your brain to the back of your skull as you read The Essential Don Murray.
The first word is writing – no great surprise.
The second word is draft. The late Don Murray revered the idea of developing a document through multiple versions or drafts. But the draft is dead, killed by the word processor and the Web. Is it worth mourning?
I admire the use of drafts that Murray evangelized. To him, the act of composing multiple drafts of a document is how you think outside of your brain.
You write, then rewrite until you create an acceptable version of your work. With each draft, better words organize themselves around your thesis while the bad ones are cut.
But this kind of writing is dying out. Drafts or versions are lost each time we save a document. Or, worse still, it seems like most writing is a first draft: flawed and hurried. I’ve written tens of thousands of words that way. Maybe you have, too.
I love the Internet and how it puts people in contact with each other. However, it’s contributing to a lot of shallow thinking and superficial communication. We never seem to have more than milliseconds to get someone’s attention and jab a virtual hypodermic of data in their digital arm because no one has time to read. Or edit. And our technology makes it fast and easy.
We value simple concepts and short messages. Most written communication is now a first draft because it takes seconds to type and send it, so why do more than the minimum amount of effort, especially when there are a thousand other things that require your immediate attention? No one takes hours to compose a letter any more.
Very few people keep copies of their drafts to see what’s changed.
Is the term draft irrelevant now? Electronic documents are never finished when they can change at any moment. There’s rarely a previous version to go back to.
The draft comes from an era when few people could publish their writing beyond their immediate circle of friends and acquaintances. Today, anyone can publish their work to an audience. Most of it is “off the cuff” writing from people who might never write more than one draft even prior to the digital era… if they wrote anything at all. That writing is an extension of common speech into digital media. It’s the stuff of the virtual date, party, meeting and phone call without the need for physical proximity.
But I’m finding value in Don Murray’s ideas and other people do, too. The other night I started writing a section of my new project. I didn’t have an outline. I was thinking while writing. Many of the words were fumbling, superfluous and will never see the light of day. However, they directed my thoughts and they led me towards a breakthrough realization for my project. But it will take more drafts to realize. That’s the price I’m willing to pay for this project.
This isn’t how I normally write blog posts or articles. Normally, a blog post starts with an idea and several supporting bullet points. Then I add the necessary words and force everything into shape. This time I used words to try to understand what I really thought about my topic, like putting a jigsaw puzzle together without a picture for reference. It’ll take multiple drafts to get it right, as Don Murray would have said. I’ll benefit from being able to see each stage of revision.
Many writers force words into certain shapes because they have clear directions of what they need to achieve. A lot of the high level thinking is done for them ahead of time. They become adept at following directions because that’s what pays the bills. There’s nothing wrong with that. It’s just that there are other possibilities.
What most of us don’t do nearly enough is to work our ideas through multiple iterations so that the words lead us to truth and clarity. The false starts, mistakes and changes of direction are worth keeping, like sections of a map that we use go from origin to destination. Or, better still, like time-lapsed photos that show incremental progress in building something.
This history of progress disappears every time we save our document, obliterating the previous version. The next time you about to click on the Save icon, ask yourself this question: is it safe for me to obliterate the previous version of this work? Or should I save my drafts so I can find my way back to a logical place if I get stuck later on?
The draft isn’t really dead but I think we’ve forgotten how valuable it can be. Long live the draft.
N.B. This is not a first draft. I could keep going and improving this piece, but I had to stop somewhere.